Now everyone who read the Serpents Skin story knows I put it on hold. I'm going to work on this new idea(well its actually kinda three different ideas)

This story will be about a whole (made up) soldier infiltrating Russia. Naked Snake will be involved, but this is also a American soldier. He does not know about Snake and Snake doesnt know about him.

His real name is supposed to be: Michael Kingsley. Altough he calls himself this, so it is not certain that this is his real name.

He goes by the codename: Acothlon.

He will be deployed at the other side than Naked Snake. Around Sokrovenno South. Now he thinks he is there to defeat Volgin and stuff and to save Sokolov. He will be given fake directions.

Big parts of the original story will be cut, so ignore them.

This is a intro, so it is not yet written like a game. The other sequence is however.

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Intro

A man was sitting on some kind of army plane. ‘’Are we clear Michael?’’ a voice from the back said. The man was silent. ‘’I said are we clear? Michael!’’ the voice screamed from the back. It was not a American accent, it was sort of Russian mixed with English. The man just sat there saying nothing. ‘’For God sakes Michael!! Are we clear?!’’ the voice screamed heavily from the back. ‘’Yes…. Yes we are.’’ The man said silently. ‘’Stand up, you’re almost off!’’ The man was wearing some green camo, it was called Olive Drab. It is the basic camo for infiltrating. He had a ‘’survival belt’’ equipped and a knife and gun holster, he was wearing some kind of gas mask. ‘’Do you know you’re mission?’’ The man was standing still with his back towards the ‘’Russian-English’’ man. ‘’You told me a hundred times, damnit! We are clear! I know my mission!’’ Michael showed some anger. ‘’Good’’ the voice from the back said. Michael stood before a hatch, the hatch was supposed to open in a matter of minutes. ‘’We are landing above the Virgin Cliffs, are you ready to jump?’’ Michael sighed. ‘’Devon, activate stealth’’ the man screamed from the back. There was someone else on board, a woman. She looked like she would be something like 25 years old. Then again, looks are deceiving. ‘’Devon did you copy?’’ the man screamed yet again. ‘’Yes, yes you don’t have to tell me a thousand times’’ the woman(Devon) looked irritated. ‘’He always does that’’ out of the nowhere Michael said something. ‘’Oh, will you shut it!’’ the man screamed angered. Michael laughed. ‘’Do we open the hatch now?’’ Devon asked the man in the back. You really couldn’t see the man in the back, he was all covered in shadows. Devon sat behind a computer operating, she wore a thick red dress, with a yellow blouse. She had beautiful blonde hair. ‘’No, not yet. Wait at my signal.’’ The man responded. ‘’Hey Colonel!?’’ Michael screamed. ‘’What is it now…?’’ The man sighed. ‘’You never told me what to call you’’ ‘’Well call me… Call me Colonel Silver, yes that’s right Colonel Silver’’ Colonel Silver responded. ‘’What’s my codename?’’ Michael asked. ‘’We been through this before! You’re codename is Acothlon.’’ Silver responded. ‘’Hmmm… Very well thought I could change youre mind…’’ Michael sighed. ‘’don’t worry, Acothlon is a nice name’’ Devon said with a pleasing voice. ‘’Tha..’’ Michael was interrupted by Silver. ‘’No time for chat. Open the hatch!’’ Silver screamed through the plane. Silver did a few steps forward, you could finally see him. He was wearing baggy-cargo pants, and a green jacket filled with medals. He had grayish black hair and a small beard. ‘’Acothlon, I’ll contact you have landed.’’ Silver said while looking at Acothlon. ‘’Very well… See you soon!’’ Acothlon said. The hatch opened. ‘’I’ll give the signal! 5….4….3….2….1….JUMP!!’’ Acothlon jumped out of the plain. ‘’So long!!’’ Devon yelled...

Flashback Sequence

A man was sitting in some kind of small dark room. He was wearing casual clothes, and had sunglasses on him. He was sitting on his bed. His vest was white, and his pants were black. He heard a knock on the door, he went to see who it was and then opened it.

Colonel Silver
Michael, may I come in?

Michael(Acothlon)
Yeah euhhh sure..

Michael opened the door and let Silver in. Michael closed the door.

Michael(Acothlon)
So, what do you want?

Colonel Silver
Well, we have been given a mission.

Michael(Acothlon)
Mission? What kind of mission?

Colonel Silver
Sorry Michael, but do you have some coffee.

Michael(Acothlon)
Oh, yeah sorry…

Michael ran to the kitchen, and grabbed a bag with coffee beans. He started making coffee.

Colonel Silver
Michael, tell me one more thing. Why is you’re bedroom right next to the door, where people come in.

Michael gave a glance at the Colonel and then looked back at his coffee.

Colonel Silver
I’m sorry. Never mind.
The Colonel walked into the kitchen and took a seat at the table.

Michael(Acothlon)
Coffees ready!

Michael took out one glass and poured coffee into it, he put the glass on the table.

Colonel Silver
Aren’t you doing to have some coffee?

Michael(Acothlon)
No, I don’t drink coffee.

Silver took a sip of his coffee while Michael sat down next to him.

Michael(Acothlon)
Tell me about the mission we got.

Silver took another sip of his coffee.

Colonel Silver
Well… Did you ever kill someone, Michael?

Michael(Acothlon)
Yes. Yes I did. A couple of years ago on some other mission in China.

Colonel Silver
So you infiltrated before in a other country?

Michael(Acothlon)
Yes, I did.

Silver took a sip of his coffee.

Colonel Silver
Well, anyway… The mission is supposed to be in the Soviet Union., at a place called Virgin Cliffs. Did you ever heard of a scientist called Sokolov?

Michael(Acothlon)
Yes, the one who invented that rocket? What was it… Sputnik right?

Colonel Silver
Right. He defected to the United States, but was caught. They killed some of our men and brought him back to The Soviet Union.

Michael(Acothlon)
The hospital mass murder right?

Colonel Silver
Right that’s the one. He has been caught against his own will and will be killed, you have to save him.

Michael(Acothlon)
Am I the only one, in this mission?

Colonel Silver
Yes you are, remember Michael if you get caught it will be a very big problem. We are not allowed to cross into the Soviet Union. So it will be kept totally secret. You and a woman named Devon who will be the mission counselor and me. We are the only people involved.

The Colonel took another sip of his coffee.

Colonel Silver
Can I have more please?

Michael put in more coffee for Silver.

Michael(Acothlon)
Is there more into the mission?

Colonel Silver
Yes, there is. Ever heard of the name Thunderbolt?

Michael(Acothlon)
Yes, I have. The dreaded Colonel who wants to take over the Khrushchev government?

Colonel Silver
Yes. You have to eliminate him. You also have to destroy the machine Sokolov is developing.

Michael pushed the chair away and went over to the sink. Michael had dark/brown hair little bit longer than to his neck.

Michael(Acothlon)
Is that all?

Colonel Silver
Yes you will get more mission briefings, if you meet me at this place.

Colonel Silver finished his coffee and put the cup on the sink. Colonel Silver gave Michael a piece of paper.

Michael(Acothlon)
What’s this?

Colonel Silver
That is your codename and the place we meet at in exactly three weeks from this day, and at this time.

Michael(Acothlon)
Acothlon?

Colonel Silver
Now I go.

Michael showed Silver the door, Silver left.

Quite good stuff man, has potential to unfold nicely, though if it's to be taken more seriously, I would reccomend using more formal language when writing the next part, but other than that it's good :thumb: