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Title: Exciting.


JCC - January 14, 2008 06:00 PM (GMT)
I heard your voice today.

It was in the form of a cackling laugh.
It was strange, raw, guttural.
It was like an animal's tortured shriek.
I found it strangely enticing.

It was... attractive, repulsive, endearing.
God help me, it drew me closer.
Closer to the brink on which I teeter.
It was perfect despair, and I need more.

It was the happiest I've ever been.
The most depressed I've ever felt.
Terrifying, comforting, it split my mind.
It's indistinct mutters holding me intently.

It didn't... SAY anything.
It just sounded.
A ring.
A moan.
A scream.
A cry.
A plead.
An unspoken witticism.
I laugh.
The reverberation was unbearable. Deafening. Cacophonous. Cold.

Exciting.

It reeled me in like nothing else ever had.

It was unbelievable. It was tangible, intangible, a grounded reality and a flight of fancy. It was...

Exciting.

Providence - January 15, 2008 01:52 AM (GMT)
Oh dude, I love you..

In other words, I think it's pretty fucking great..




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