God forgive me for this, I just wanted to try something, just 4 lines, take it or leave it however you will, I'm sure a LOT of you will agree with me about this poem:

Broken Hearted

I had entered the bathroom,
but had become broken hearted,
I wanted to take a shit,
but sadly I just farted.

This isn't a serious poem, just some bathroom humor at it's saddest....especially when it's a true story. It hurts even more when you still feel like taking a dump WHILE you're teaching. <_<

*And by bathroom humor, I mean I've heard this from my roommate, and also in the school shitters, guess it's a very commonly known poem. STILL, I take full credit for the title. :D *

XD!

That is quite, quite genius. And much better than the alternatives avalible to read

Lolz...

Low Blow...

We alll know I speak the truth though

Oh yeah, and I thank you for saying what everyone was thinking...

Hey, if you got something to say to her, let her know, just don't all out flame her. But her work needs help, that much we can ALL agree on. :roll:

And did anyone see the irony in the title? :D

Yeah I caught the Irony...

But also I do try to help her through PMs and in real life...

:lmao: that is funny

*making sure it stays 3 words, smilies don't count.*
*punches BigK for editing my post :D*

It lacks that special aura of poetry.

I told you, I ain't a poet, I'm a screenwriter. Like the topic says, it IS a stupid ass poem. :ph43r:

I was joking. This is a work of art.

I wasn't though, I ain't a poet. I only took one poetry class and after FTV60, forgot most of my teachings.... :unsure:

This was written on the door of one of the stalls in the dorms here, along with a few other four-line classics.

BigK, plagiarism? Not a good colour on you. Maybe you should go for a muted green instead.

Small world, I saw this exact same poem in Davis' shitters as well. My roommate Paul told me this poem so I knew it sounded familiar, since I didn't remember, I wanted to take credit for it anyway. Guess it's not Paul's either, oh well. Guess I better credit it in my opening post.

@JCC.....muted green.....yikes.....I hope you're not talking about the shit green....

If your shit is green you'd be best advised to visit your GP.

:) very nice BigK...made me laugh at least, even if you say it's not 'real' poetry. :P

@micster: (totally agree with you man. :thumb: )
*cough*
Anyway, like I was saying it's totally outrageous to flame someone...yes...

*sigh* K, listen bra poetry comes from the heart man like ya know what i'm comin from bra?

seriously though it's written in stanzas it has propper flow...it's a poem a funny...poem :lmao: damn it's funny!

Oh boy, I'm glad we have your expert opinion to guide us on these matters.