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White Ribbon; poem
Topic Started: Sep 24 2007, 07:12 PM (407 Views)
angel_in_the_dark	Sep 24 2007, 07:12 PM Post #1
Light Infantry Posts: 122 Group: Members Member #6,245 Joined: September 21, 2007	I have a white ribbon i carry it with me whereever i go then one night something happened and the next morning the ribbon was gray mommy doesn't know i told daddy, though daddy doesn't know what to say he doesn't know what to do because. . . i told him that my uncle made my ribbon so.
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The Black Devil Of Outer Heaven	Sep 24 2007, 09:48 PM Post #2
How well do you live?.....In your Mind? Posts: 2,138 Group: Outer Heaven Member #5,305 Joined: May 23, 2007 Favourite Metal Gear Title? Metal Gear Solid 3: Snake Eater	It was all right, But from what I've seen on here, there are better.
	Meow, Improve your life//Facebook profile//Acceptable Use Policy//Outer Heaven Recruitment page "Everyone is born a genius, but the process of living de-geniuses them."-Buckminster Fuller


codemaster57	Sep 25 2007, 01:32 AM Post #3
3GB of unadalterated funny pun Posts: 2,213 Group: FoxHound Member #6,131 Joined: August 30, 2007 Favourite Metal Gear Title? Metal Gear Solid: Portable Ops	Pretty straight forward with the symbolism... Meh... 4/10...
	Status: Recovering Reason: Food poisoning from chicken made by a drunk (not joking) REMEMBER DECEMBER 10 ~~ December 10 Veteran


Mortale Red Wolf	Sep 25 2007, 02:30 AM Post #4
Jail Guard Posts: 35 Group: Members Member #6,231 Joined: September 20, 2007	ahhh.... yeah... Its okay... but there is better out there... um... try not scratching at the surface and go more in depth... like more vague so people can relate to it and think on it. yeah... yeah... yeah... have a nice day.



angel_in_the_dark	Oct 12 2007, 05:50 PM Post #5
Light Infantry Posts: 122 Group: Members Member #6,245 Joined: September 21, 2007	i guess.
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shiver_motion	Oct 16 2007, 06:49 AM Post #6
Light Infantry Posts: 174 Group: Members Member #5,385 Joined: June 2, 2007	those two last lines were epic
	That's not rain. That's God crying, because he knows Snake's gonna keep Him working nights.


codemaster57	Oct 16 2007, 12:54 PM Post #7
3GB of unadalterated funny pun Posts: 2,213 Group: FoxHound Member #6,131 Joined: August 30, 2007 Favourite Metal Gear Title? Metal Gear Solid: Portable Ops	shiver_motion Oct 16 2007, 12:49 AM those two last lines were epic you obviously never read a truly "epic" poem...
	Status: Recovering Reason: Food poisoning from chicken made by a drunk (not joking) REMEMBER DECEMBER 10 ~~ December 10 Veteran


Mortale Red Wolf	Oct 16 2007, 02:31 PM Post #8
Jail Guard Posts: 35 Group: Members Member #6,231 Joined: September 20, 2007	shiver_motion Oct 16 2007, 06:49 AM those two last lines were epic what did you say? Epic poem? You don't know what an epic poem is... an epic poem drives your soul and rises it up to a better meaning... this...this here... kills it drives your mind down... how dare you talk of epic poems..



angel_in_the_dark	Oct 16 2007, 03:44 PM Post #9
Light Infantry Posts: 122 Group: Members Member #6,245 Joined: September 21, 2007	looking this discussion or arguement, whatever it is. . . it's quite amusing. :lol:
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shiver_motion	Oct 17 2007, 02:46 AM Post #10
Light Infantry Posts: 174 Group: Members Member #5,385 Joined: June 2, 2007	Mortale Red Wolf Oct 16 2007, 02:31 PM shiver_motion Oct 16 2007, 06:49 AM those two last lines were epic what did you say? Epic poem? You don't know what an epic poem is... an epic poem drives your soul and rises it up to a better meaning... this...this here... kills it drives your mind down... how dare you talk of epic poems.. you cant tell me what i think is epic i dont shove down your throat what i think i find the last lines very, very, witty. there does that make your e-penis bigger?
	That's not rain. That's God crying, because he knows Snake's gonna keep Him working nights.


Mortale Red Wolf	Oct 17 2007, 03:56 AM Post #11
Jail Guard Posts: 35 Group: Members Member #6,231 Joined: September 20, 2007	shiver_motion Oct 17 2007, 02:46 AM Mortale Red Wolf Oct 16 2007, 02:31 PM shiver_motion Oct 16 2007, 06:49 AM those two last lines were epic what did you say? Epic poem? You don't know what an epic poem is... an epic poem drives your soul and rises it up to a better meaning... this...this here... kills it drives your mind down... how dare you talk of epic poems.. you cant tell me what i think is epic i dont shove down your throat what i think i find the last lines very, very, witty. there does that make your e-penis bigger? How dare you. You could have said witty instead of epic.... please, and I am a girl not a boy. Go spam else where. Epic is described as people who make such works as The Inferno or even Oedipus not some little poem with 'witty' words. Choose your words wisely in this forum. Oh and for the record I was explaining epic to you not telling you off, but seriously get your facts right. I am not telling you what I think and epic poem is but what an epic poem FACTUALLY is.



shiver_motion	Oct 17 2007, 04:13 AM Post #12
Light Infantry Posts: 174 Group: Members Member #5,385 Joined: June 2, 2007	Quote: Go spam else where. no Quote: Epic is described as people who make such works as The Inferno or even Oedipus not some little poem with 'witty' words. o so now now you decide what is epic? who decides if something is epic? Quote: I am not telling you what I think and epic poem is but what an epic poem FACTUALLY is. you havent stated anything factually yet, so essentially all you have done is tell me what you think Quote: Oh and for the record I was explaining epic to you not telling you off, but seriously get your facts right. well definitely didnt come off like that...a quote comes to mind Quote: Choose your words wisely in this forum. yep thats the one
	That's not rain. That's God crying, because he knows Snake's gonna keep Him working nights.


angel_in_the_dark	Oct 17 2007, 01:55 PM Post #13
Light Infantry Posts: 122 Group: Members Member #6,245 Joined: September 21, 2007	omg.
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JCC	Oct 17 2007, 04:26 PM Post #14
I smoke my friends down to the filter. Posts: 6,028 Group: Members Member #1,818 Joined: March 2, 2006	Are some people's sarcasm detectors getting a little rusty?
	FearHeldDear,Mar 23 2008 03:18 PM Yackemflaber,Mar 22 2008 12:35 AM I prefer metal like Chevelle or Korn


The Black Devil Of Outer Heaven	Oct 17 2007, 04:50 PM Post #15
How well do you live?.....In your Mind? Posts: 2,138 Group: Outer Heaven Member #5,305 Joined: May 23, 2007 Favourite Metal Gear Title? Metal Gear Solid 3: Snake Eater	JCC Oct 17 2007, 10:26 AM Are some people's sarcasm detectors getting a little rusty? Apparently...dude, shiver...you've kinda flown of the handle here man. This poem...It's all-right, nothing I would personally call "epic". But when people told you that, you flew into a tempertantrum, I mean if you just admit that this poem, and no lines in it are epic, then you've got nothing to worry about. If you continue, I fear for your mental health. Hehe, just joking about that last part. How old are you? Have you read any good poems? If your answers are: Below the age of 14-13, and No. Then you should really not try to argue with people who have, because then it comes out like B.S.
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shiver_motion	Oct 17 2007, 05:22 PM Post #16
Light Infantry Posts: 174 Group: Members Member #5,385 Joined: June 2, 2007	Quote: Apparently...dude, shiver...you've kinda flown of the handle here man. This poem...It's all-right, nothing I would personally call "epic". But when people told you that, you flew into a tempertantrum, I mean if you just admit that this poem, and no lines in it are epic, then you've got nothing to worry about. If you continue, I fear for your mental health. Hehe, just joking about that last part. How old are you? Have you read any good poems? If your answers are: Below the age of 14-13, and No. Then you should really not try to argue with people who have, because then it comes out like B.S. how old are you?
	That's not rain. That's God crying, because he knows Snake's gonna keep Him working nights.


angel_in_the_dark	Oct 17 2007, 05:39 PM Post #17
Light Infantry Posts: 122 Group: Members Member #6,245 Joined: September 21, 2007	omg. ya'll are funny.
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Mortale Red Wolf	Oct 17 2007, 06:11 PM Post #18
Jail Guard Posts: 35 Group: Members Member #6,231 Joined: September 20, 2007	shiver_motion Oct 17 2007, 05:22 PM Quote: Apparently...dude, shiver...you've kinda flown of the handle here man. This poem...It's all-right, nothing I would personally call "epic". But when people told you that, you flew into a tempertantrum, I mean if you just admit that this poem, and no lines in it are epic, then you've got nothing to worry about. If you continue, I fear for your mental health.� Hehe, just joking about that last part. How old are you? Have you read any good poems? If your answers are: Below the age of 14-13, and No. Then you should really not try to argue with people who have, because then it comes out like B.S. how old are you? alot older than you apparently. What great poems have you read besides reading poems here?



angel_in_the_dark	Oct 17 2007, 06:19 PM Post #19
Light Infantry Posts: 122 Group: Members Member #6,245 Joined: September 21, 2007	wow. Red Wolf , you're all very serious about all this. why don't you just let it go? if Shiver wants to think that, let him. it's not like anyone actually liked it, or anything.
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codemaster57	Oct 17 2007, 06:26 PM Post #20
3GB of unadalterated funny pun Posts: 2,213 Group: FoxHound Member #6,131 Joined: August 30, 2007 Favourite Metal Gear Title? Metal Gear Solid: Portable Ops	angel_in_the_dark Oct 17 2007, 12:19 PM wow. Red Wolf , you're all very serious about all this. why don't you just let it go? if Shiver wants to think that, let him. it's not like anyone actually liked it, or anything. She's very passionate about literature, and dislikes people who try to talk like they know literature... It would have been fine if shiver would've just said okay it's not really an "epic" work, but instead he decided to stand by his words (which I admire). Sadly, he took it to an extreme and went on his tangent...
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