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| remixed the lyrics; what do you guys think | |
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| Topic Started: Sep 9 2008, 10:21 PM (214 Views) | |
| XxGRAY-FOXX-xX | Sep 9 2008, 10:21 PM Post #1 |
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living your life by t.i. and rihanna except i remixed it to show you guys my emotions and problems Nevermind what haters say, ignore them 'til they fade away. Amazing you great for after all the shit I gave away. Safe to say I paved the way, for you to get pissed today. i still be wasting days away, nah had I never saved the day. Consider them my protégé, how much I think you should hate. Instead of being gracious, i violated and made you wait. I never been a hater still I love ya, yeah I graze the way. Some say they so yay and no i couldn't even make it work that day. It aint that i made sneaky remarks, its just that im grey. I'm on your side anyway, even if I let the day fade away. i moved away to make a way not move away cause im afraid. I went back to your hood and all you ever did was hate away. I pray for patience but they make me want to face away. Like I once made you scream, now I couldnt even make myself plead my case away. Been buggin all my life, can't say that i deserve a break. you'd rather watch me crash and burn than let me say sorry I'm the opposite of moderate, immaculately polished with the spirit of a kid and the mind set of a man Allergic to the counterfeit, impartial to the politics. Articulate but still you grab me by the collar quick. i had problems, i reckonsile and just holla 'tip. If that don't work and all else fails, then ill turn around and follow 'tip. I got love for you but ay I'm not in love with all of you all the way. I can do without the friends cuz they all comedy nowadays. The pissin' and the hollerin', back and forth with the argueing. What do you want, why do you care, what you make and dont talk to me no more. Seems as though you lost sight of whats important with the positive. And i check your myspace account,til ya changed it, and you're about poverted. my values in a disarray, prioritized horribly. Unhappy with the friends cause i pissed ya off morally. Ignoring all prior advice and fore warning. And we mighty full of ourselves all of a sudden aren't we? remember i designed this rhyme to remember why i want to be friends again remember that i was pissed and did not know what i was doing remember that i love all yo features why i make those rhythms of rhyme collide, i dont know im crazy thats just it im just livin life, but i want to say sorry please forgive please forget please let me apologize i know i f***** up real bad and im not in love with it, i see ya around and you wont even spit ma way ———- well thats my remix i hope ya liked it. its all based on my life and nothing is out of random Edited by XxGRAY-FOXX-xX, Nov 21 2008, 12:27 AM.
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| koik | Sep 9 2008, 10:26 PM Post #2 |
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Great job! |
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| XxGRAY-FOXX-xX | Sep 9 2008, 10:32 PM Post #3 |
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hahahahaha, nice i put in a lot of work for it, it was really difficult, especially since i was trying to express my feelings |
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im at the top of the food chain and bitch im gettin hungry respect list: FH: rain, codey, faizey, otacon_hal TSF: black king, ninja girl, scar snake, koik, the protagonist, squallzy DC: saddy poo, wraithy, nathan OH:the departed JOIN THE REVOLUTION TODAY![color] | |
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| OuterJaccob | Sep 9 2008, 10:37 PM Post #4 |
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I don't know anything about lyrics, but I rather enjoyed reading it, so you must be doing something right. Nice going GRAY. |
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| Granin | Sep 9 2008, 10:37 PM Post #5 |
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Really quite good, although I dont Rheanna, your lyrics are better than hers lol. You did well to sum up your feelings. |
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| XxGRAY-FOXX-xX | Sep 9 2008, 10:39 PM Post #6 |
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thanks guys, means alot |
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im at the top of the food chain and bitch im gettin hungry respect list: FH: rain, codey, faizey, otacon_hal TSF: black king, ninja girl, scar snake, koik, the protagonist, squallzy DC: saddy poo, wraithy, nathan OH:the departed JOIN THE REVOLUTION TODAY![color] | |
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| NinjaGirl | Sep 10 2008, 01:02 AM Post #7 |
Explosives Specialist
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I don't think I have heard that Rihanna song... Don't listen to much of her, but I really liked it. Nice job. THis line is definately true: "I can do without the friends cuz they all comedy nowadays." |
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| XxGRAY-FOXX-xX | Sep 10 2008, 01:03 AM Post #8 |
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lol, its from t.i., it features rihanna, and its new. i remixed it though thanks 
Edited by XxGRAY-FOXX-xX, Sep 10 2008, 01:04 AM.
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im at the top of the food chain and bitch im gettin hungry respect list: FH: rain, codey, faizey, otacon_hal TSF: black king, ninja girl, scar snake, koik, the protagonist, squallzy DC: saddy poo, wraithy, nathan OH:the departed JOIN THE REVOLUTION TODAY![color] | |
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| Ra!den | Sep 10 2008, 01:25 AM Post #9 |
Sharpshooter
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WOW REALLY WELL DONE GRAY FOX! oops caps |
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| XxGRAY-FOXX-xX | Sep 10 2008, 02:24 AM Post #10 |
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i see the caps as a compliment here is the original song: http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=fczdsw8nRFM |
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im at the top of the food chain and bitch im gettin hungry respect list: FH: rain, codey, faizey, otacon_hal TSF: black king, ninja girl, scar snake, koik, the protagonist, squallzy DC: saddy poo, wraithy, nathan OH:the departed JOIN THE REVOLUTION TODAY![color] | |
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| rain | Sep 10 2008, 11:58 PM Post #11 |
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haven't heard the song, but it was pretty good still. you might want to change the... uh crap, whats the word? styckeindelning... aw whatever. great job 
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| Digitaldude | Sep 11 2008, 12:31 AM Post #12 |
It's Soccer not Football
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Yeah its good, but i dont like riahanna either but it think u should write ur own song from scratch would mean alot more to yourself |
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| wraith shadow | Sep 11 2008, 01:17 AM Post #13 |
Master of Karate and Friendship.
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I put "no" but it is oppisite day in my world so  Its fine |
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| XxGRAY-FOXX-xX | Sep 11 2008, 01:21 AM Post #14 |
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oh wow wraithy, lol thanks for all your comments guys |
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im at the top of the food chain and bitch im gettin hungry respect list: FH: rain, codey, faizey, otacon_hal TSF: black king, ninja girl, scar snake, koik, the protagonist, squallzy DC: saddy poo, wraithy, nathan OH:the departed JOIN THE REVOLUTION TODAY![color] | |
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| snaker | Sep 18 2008, 06:37 PM Post #15 |
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Me likey. Make ore of that mate, it good. |
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| The Protagonist | Sep 18 2008, 10:09 PM Post #16 |
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Hahaha, laughed hard on that, rain! First time I see you talk Swedish to an American member  Du borde söka upp det ordet pĺ engelska först, kanske? Nice to see that I'm not the only Swedish member who's active.Okay, enough talking Swedish. I thought it was great, Gray. Nice remix! Keep it up! |
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| XxGRAY-FOXX-xX | Sep 19 2008, 12:21 AM Post #17 |
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thanks guys. ill be making another one as soon as i can or as soon as i hear a good song |
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