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MGS Comic strip; A comic strip I am making.
Topic Started: Oct 4 2008, 08:28 AM (184 Views)
Captain Hobo
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Hey guys I am only new. But I mainly joined this forum to see what you hardcore fans think of my comic strip.
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Edited by Captain Hobo, Oct 4 2008, 08:44 AM.
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rain
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haha, thats pretty good! :) but it would be better if you changed the faces as they talk =P (nothing too complicated, just use the in-game 'angry snake' or so)
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The Black Devil Of Outer Heaven
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How well do you live?.....In your Mind?

Not bad. ;)

Faces thing would be cool. Try more witty humor, more suggestion, less IN YOUR FACE. It's funnier that way. Example: Don't spell out the "HIS" thing in the gay joke with the colonel. Up to right after snake tells him out the ad and the colonel says "Yeah So?" You could put "....." Or something.

Stuff like that. ;)

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XxGRAY-FOXX-xX
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haha, that was funny, i definitely liked it
great job
i agree with rain though, a little bit of facial expression would be great




* no need to double post though* :thumbsup:
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Kanashe
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Heheheh, pretty nice comic, love the explosion joke
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Captain Hobo
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Thanks for the constructive critisism. Sorry about the double post. I'm thinking about putting in facial expressions. Also making some with the Naomi Codec screen.
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Those were funny but as black devil said use more witty humor.But they are still good post more when you have made more.
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This Tastes...HORRIBLE!!! Hungry for Some Snake?

I cracked up at the "Colonel, this is Snake, can you hear me?" "No." Hahahahaha, that's really good stuff! Keep it up!
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bah dont worry about being subtle, this is brilliant! perfect as is. MOAR PLZ K THX!
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It's Soccer not Football :P

Yeah more i enjoyed reading it.
I do agree on being more wittier, but if thats not your style then dont worry.
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