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Organization Pub
Topic Started: Jan 23 2016, 11:10:16 PM (3,711 Views)
The Baneposter
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Max was weary of the road. His work as a free lance mercenary for the Argumentum company paid well, but it took him to many a place far from home. Placed such as Metallum Machina Solidus, a distant land ruled by the fifth of its line. Interesting job, that one. He was initially hired by a rebel group, to stir up trouble and decry the coronation of the fifth heir, only to end up approached by an emissary of the court itself to reel in and attack the rebels.

In truth, it was never about the gold. He genuinely enjoyed the work, he fought under so many banners, for and against so many different views. The heat of battle, seeing his enemies drop their blade as the cold steel of his arm punctured their flesh. But there was no place like home.

He pulled at the reigns of his steed, an expensive stallion. Cost him 300 Golden Mahakaman Pensions, but its sturdiness and steed more than made up for the heavy cost. He hitched it by the gates, and proceeded through the town.

While indeed, there were many places to go and observe, the heart of the city was always its Organization Pub. A massive building, one could easily mistake the building for a cathedral, with its multi layered structure, its white, but its base nature as a congregation for all shady misfits was given away by its rough white bricked structure. The clinking of the man's armor as he approached the old, wooden doors was soon as drowned out by the sound of someone banging against the walls.

Ahh yes, of course.

Beside him lay a wretched little creature. Malnourished and deformed by nature, its limbs were weak and wavy, its head out out of proportion with the rest of its body accentuated by its big brown eyes, but not of the captivating kind that would entrap a man in the fingers of a fair maiden, this creature was ugly and appalling. And just as the warrior had noticed, so to did it notice him.

It crawled quickly over the ground like a mad hound, sticking to his leg, desperately trying to buy its way into the establishment. It was something everyone had to deal with, and Max was no different. As a last resort the creature would bite into whomever it stuck to. Max simply chuckled to himself as it let out a smell yelp of pain, its teeth unable to crack the reinforced leather of his boots. He shook it off before giving it another taste of his foot, kicking it away into its own dark corner.

Cruel and unnecessary it may seem, but one must realize the history of this creature. It was accepted with open arms its first, its sillier actions were the cause for hearty laughs around the table, but it wasn't until the creature grew bold that the citizenry started to despise its presence. It'd bite and bite, poor attempts at gaining the attention of the pub. It wasn't long before it was ousted from the pub, along with anyone who endorsed it.

Organization's pub was unique in that it didn't have the typical multiple table set up of any road side inn, it was one massive stretched out hall where everyone had a seat on one table, the bar made out of finely carved, refined wood was stuck to the center left of the room, where a man with a badger like hair cut tended to the patrons.

For the first time in months, Max was home.

''Hey, 'Fluxe, give me the strongest thing you've got''
The man laughed, immediately recognizing the mercenary.
''Back to us, I see. I hope the Flying Spaghetti Monster didn't bother you too much?''
''That's what you call it now?'' he chuckled ''this is something the table should fill me on. Nice chatting with you.''

And so, drink in hand, Max took his seat among his people.

To Be Continued
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Ever since the " It'd bite and bite, poor attempts at gaining the attention of the pub.", I knew that it was FSM.

Before that, it was just a heavily implied.
Edited by Tricerius, Jan 23 2016, 11:14:16 PM.
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Cruel and unnecessary it may seem, but one must realize the history of this creature. It was accepted with open arms its first, its sillier actions were the cause for hearty laughs around the table, but it wasn't until the creature grew bold that the citizenry started to despise its presence. It'd bite and bite, poor attempts at gaining the attention of the pub. It wasn't long before it was ousted from the pub, along with anyone who endorsed it.


I legitimately lol'd at this.

Nice work man.
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I know there are a bunch of spelling errors so forgive those, i'll fix them soon. I wrote this into the box in like 40 minutes haha
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Tricerius
Jan 23 2016, 11:14:04 PM
Ever since the " It'd bite and bite, poor attempts at gaining the attention of the pub.", I knew that it was FSM.

Before that, it was just a heavily implied.
LOL Same.

Good one Aragorn, right giggle mate. I love the idea of Org Pub having one HUGE table where everybody had a seat. That's a real nice way to put it.
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I'll admit I pulled a George Lucas on that one haha. I didn't really think of it that way, I just couldn't a find way to adequately describe table and seat arrangements without saying ''there are table and seats everywhere'' so I made it one giant table. Only later did I realize its a neat fit. :P

Y'all going to be introduced bit by bit. We're even going to have fight scenes.
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Jan 23 2016, 11:34:43 PM
We're even going to have fight scenes.
70 chapters of Intandem fighting everybody off about Star Wars*

Intandem You know I ADORE you. <3
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...Burger King?

:bravo:

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wat is this place

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Nice of you to make me the protag!
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random lol but highly readable. well done ;)
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This pub reminds me of the rest stop in The Hateful Eight

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Haha good job man, maybe it's because of my Witcher 3 hype but I couldn't help but picture this story in the Witcher universe. I hope you do continue it.

Btw, I knew it was FSM at "wretched little creature".
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Ah this is great Gorny. Excited for the series
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great idea dude, I hope you do more than play to outward stereotypes of individuals - dig a bit deeper, I know you've got the prowess
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yeah I expect Shakespearian masterpieces about org chat
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Jan 24 2016, 05:07:55 AM
yeah I expect Shakespearian masterpieces about org chat
duck i'm gonna fucking terrorize your ass on battlefront this week
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lol man great job

that character development for FSM was the quickest i ever seen lol

from a zero to still a zero


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i'm not going to rag on him too much in this. i just couldn't resist doing it this time tbh
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Just read though this, genius haha. Kind of gives me a "The Canterbury Tales" vibe. But that's only if each of us gave our own tale.
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You stop right fucking there and apologies Infiltrator . CIA is many things; a has been meme master, a baneposter who ran it to the ground so bad to where it stopped being funny, a complete and utter podcast tsundere but I will NOT allow you to call him a shitty Gary Stu who killed a 7 part book series. That's just mean and unfair.

Sorry if I sound angry but this was too much, even with the strike in mind.


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